Hey Guys,
Today I thought I would share with you some of poetry I had recently written. It has a bit of a connection to the short story I did last week. Sometimes I like to stick to a bit of a theme with my writing.
Do You See Me:
Do you see me,
The person I have become,
My bleeding heart.
Do you see me,
The lack of compassion,
My cold eyes.
Do you see me,
The unfortunate loss,
My pale skin.
Do you see me,
I wish I knew,
Because I still see you!
I hope you liked that! I get really nervous about sharing things I have written, but I am getting more confident with it.
Oh and before I go, I need to let you know, this blog is going to be changing soon, so please bare with me. Thank you!
lovely poem.
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Thank you! π
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welcome
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This is great!
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Thanks!!!! π
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Welcome!
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Aaah I love it!!
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Aww thank you π
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This is amazing.
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π π π Thanks!!!
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That’s ok π
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Well expressed…..I love it π
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Thanks! I am glad you liked it π
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Welcome π
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Beautiful poem. Keep up the writing!!
xoxo
Caylie
https://soulpaletteblog.wordpress.com/
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Aww thank you! I appreciate it π
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May I just say that this is the best thing I’ve read today. It touched my heart!
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Aww thank you! That meant a lot to me! π
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You’re welcome π
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Mind checking my recently-posted poem?
Here’s the link if you’re interested:
https://anunexpectedpoet.wordpress.com/2016/03/18/birthmark/
Thank you. π
Have a good day.
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Sure, I will have a look π
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Thank you π
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Don’t get nervous! I think this poem is great, very meaningful and skilfully written x
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Thank you for saying that! I really appreciate it π x
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It was really good!!! XD Honestly, you should do this more often!!! Great post!!!!!
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Aww thanks! I might need to haha ππ writing is just too awesome not to do more!
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You’re right!! XD And no problem!!
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I know π (joke) π
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Hahaha!! XD
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Deep. I love it
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I know haha! Thanks π
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Great poem! ~
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Thanks! π
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This is great .
Sometimes I look in the mirror and am afraid of what I see because I’ve become this total stranger that I can barely recognize. But I am trying hard to get back to the person I was before but it takes time ..
Lovely poem , don’t ever shy away from sharing your poems . you very good at it π
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Thanks! I am very much the same. I sometimes feel as though I have changed to much from the person I was, but It is about moving forward and continuing the fight. Oh and thanks again haha! βΊ
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This is amazing. βΊ
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Aww thanks!!! π
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That is a really really beautiful poem. You definitely don’t have to be worried about sharing this amazingness!! π XD
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Aww thankssssssssssss!!! π *High fives* Haha!
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Simple and elegant. Bravo!
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